1. I go to School but feel like a fool. 2. Kids fall tired I must stay awake endure the ache 3. As I slowly slump in class 4 .I don't care I need to rest, I don't care i'm the class laugh fest 5. My exhaustion is a rocky shoreline 6. My mind swirling like a drain 7. The message of my poem is to show the hardships of school and how it affects kids all across the World. My hope is to show how we all feel and how the circumstances of school affect our happiness and abilities to grow and mature. Throughout the poem I bring up emotional feelings and physical feelings, all of these being bad feelings. I use words that explain things in a negative way like “Ramble”. This world is most commonly used in a negative way. All of these play into my way of developing this message and portraying a negative feeling towards school. 8. People overlook kids' feelings as they are not as important and kids just have to deal with these types of things but school is very hard on kids in the world and it can be very hard and draining leading to depression and sadness. The way that school is, it is very hard for kids and their lives it is tiring and grueling. It is important to address these things to better the school environment for kids in the future and to better kids attitudes and moods during the school day to better their school experience and scores.